The elephant sits in the room

a children’s story

to teach about a coming doom.

Ignore it at your own risk,

walk around it

making the pace brisk,

for if

the Elephant sits in the room,

the floor will eventually crash down

creating a lonely, private

echoing tomb.


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11 CommentsLeave a comment

  1. I agree! Nicely done!

  2. wow.
    short and cute one.

  3. Nice work, well written 🙂

  4. This is awesome, loved it =)

  5. A fun and light-hearted interpretation of the prompt !

  6. wicked!

  7. Nice, enjoyed the flow and your take on the prompt–actually reminded me of this: (for obvious reasons)

  8. Wonderful image of a powerful lesson 😉

  9. Short and sweet with an element of fun!:)

  10. […] gloria […]

  11. very apt story.

    thanks for the contribution,

    welcome joining us for week 7 fun.

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