Colors shine

trapped between yours and mine.

Undulating within

to see without.

Statements made,

interpreting art retrograde.

Representing this thought


Order invades,

into a space which was made.

Changing directions

creating a vision

to expand and toss about.

1% for Art, Wendler Middle School

Anchorage, Alaska

Published in: on October 24, 2011 at 10:35 pm  Comments (14)  
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  1. I liked the word play here.

  2. fun read, full of wit.


  3. Creative and fun. Nice! 🙂

  4. art like painting and colours, speak out loud in different ways to each of us…

  5. colors intertwined to create a vision, I like that idea you put together, made me smile, thanks. Enjoy the rally!

  6. I like the sing-song tune of this rhyme. Great piece.

    Lovely pictures, by the way. =)

  7. interesting artwork. the colors in the poem paint like the colors in the artwork

  8. I love the way you have connected your words to each image both of which are unique!

  9. nice..i like the art…and your verse….

  10. Wow you were fast to get this posted at Poetry Jam! I like the combination of art and verse! Write on!

  11. I like the mixture of words and visual images – catches my attention.,

  12. not only did i enjoy the read, but also the images as well. very well done

  13. Yes, creating vision! I like this! 🙂

  14. Very enjoyable to read and look at! Thanks for sharing with Poetry Jam.

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